erkutacar Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 Studio/Institution: freelanceClient: AcarlarGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds Max Mental RayDescription: im building a residential building and this is the living room of one of the apartments.. it will be connected to the apartment below as a duplex. all comments and critiques r welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marianacaprio Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 Good job. I think you should take off the image from the TV. Also, everything looks too shiny, perhaps it's just me but the table for example looks too shiny. That glass looks great and the carpet. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkutacar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 well table is supposed to be shiny its glass. but u r right parquet and ceiling light grills should be less shiny.. i set the settings in iray and then rendered in mental ray, mental makes it more reflective.. and i just didnt bother rendering it again coz its not finished.. ill do a final render when its complete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marianacaprio Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 (edited) I wasn't talking about the glass but the lower part of the table, it's wood I guess. Don't miss understand me, everything looks great. Edited October 8, 2012 by marianacaprio I wrote "good" intead of "wood" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkutacar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 yes its wood but i like reflective surfaces.. i like polished wood. thanks a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jon Berntsen Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 (edited) I think this is a piece of decent work. However, (and this is just from my pov) the ceiling is too shiny. Also, I find it unrealistic to be that much shine in the upper part of the windows when there is no room reflection seen in the lower part. I'd eighter tone down the glossiness or add some white/gray objects to reflect behind the camera. I have never seen a floor like this, but perhaps you are working with totally different real life materials than here in Scandinavia. IMO the wood boards are too small, it takes too much focus, and at the same time they are too heavy bumped or displaced and have too much reflection. I also agree with the TV. Light spots in the frame drives the attention in the wrong direction (out of the image). Here you have an opportunity to have a naturally dark area in the left image border, use that instrument to your advantage. Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing! Edited October 8, 2012 by chroma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkutacar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 actually floor boards r not that small, that sofa is 2.6m in length.. it seems small coz the room is large. yes i agree with the bump but as i said its mental rays fault iray doesnt bump it that much.. about the glasses, i dont understand what u mean, u can totally see the reflection of the opposite wall and the staircase.. what u see in there isnt outside the glass.. its behind the camera. i agree with the attention about the ceiling. i need to decrease the reflectivity and light power too and maybe use some ambient lights to get the same about of brightnes.. i will get a better shot when its done, i left this work unfinished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jon Berntsen Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 Oh, yes! Haha, I misinterpreted the reflections there, sorry. I thought that the visible reflections was the refraction. Regarding to the floor, I'm used to these kind of floors http://www.hopearch.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Dark-laminate-parquet-flooring-feel-cozy-with-dark-theme-furniture-Copy.jpg, so that's why I'm going a little size-confused with your floor. But I understand that it's intended to be so small. Looking forward to see the next edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkutacar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 (edited) oh dude thats way too large for my taste this floor board looks like it would only suit a wooden hut on the hills Edited October 12, 2012 by erkutacar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
passionatajaloszynska Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 Nice rendering. Night scenes are hard to make, but it looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkutacar Posted October 12, 2012 Author Share Posted October 12, 2012 thnx a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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