rly Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 Hi thats my first project posted here please C&C I find inspiration in plane wing beacuse the location of this object is on the old airplane treains Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fernando Lino Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 Nice design and renderings...I 'd change this guy there....he looks like a zombie that try it to kill her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 nice design and rendering. trees and cars will help it a lot. MARK MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xgarcia Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 The scale of your poured concrete map is way off. It should be around 1/4 the size. Also the concrete walls seeme excessively thick (check the proportions). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rly Posted September 14, 2004 Author Share Posted September 14, 2004 Xgarcia I know im lokking good concrete textures this one when i change the scale is very tiled ,people are only to show the scale but this guy look strange I change him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rly Posted September 14, 2004 Author Share Posted September 14, 2004 You give me a good idea I planed there make a normal pavement but maybe i close it and make a expositions and deal center because it is in design directives THX Kicks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 the building as a whole seems very heavy and grounded. thick concrete walls firmly rooted to the ground do not describe 'airplane' well. the walkway in front seems to be literaly about walking through the body of an airplane, but this piece is only attached to the concrete structure, and not actually part of the structure itself. i am not saying what you have is bad, just questioning why you used concrete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alicja Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 vray?dyploma project?looks nice *ludziki troche dwuwymiarowe, projekt troche przedobrzyles,kolor chodnika jest nijaki, psuje odbior wizualizacji.fajnie wyglada ten betonowy kloc, dobra teksturka,milej pracy i witam na cgarch( troche tu nudno)* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rly Posted September 14, 2004 Author Share Posted September 14, 2004 vray?dyploma project?looks nice *ludziki troche dwuwymiarowe, projekt troche przedobrzyles,kolor chodnika jest nijaki, psuje odbior wizualizacji.fajnie wyglada ten betonowy kloc, dobra teksturka,milej pracy i witam na cgarch( troche tu nudno)* Yes Vray, nut not diploma project i begin work on this project last friday *Ludziki tez mi sie nie podobaja ale dalem je tylko zeby pokazac sklae bo nie jest ona zbyt czytelna z projektu.To wczesna faza projektu takze jeszcze bede nad nim pracowal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rly Posted September 18, 2004 Author Share Posted September 18, 2004 Update of my project it's still WIP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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