benschuetze Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Studio/Institution: StudioGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: C4D VrayDescription: Hi guys, I think I had mentioned before that I´m pretty new to architectural visualization (this is my 3rd or 4th month of starting from absolute scratch). This is the second scene I´ve created for a home that I´m developing myself. It´s still a wip, but I would really appreciate any feedback, advice, criticism, whatever. It´s super helpful for me and much appreciated! Thanks in advance for taking the time. Ben Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilyass Posted April 23, 2012 Share Posted April 23, 2012 the light inside is stronger than outside. and the shadows outside are not as strong as inside. that's my 2 cents . i would give more advice on how to fix it,but i don't use c4d. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roodogg Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 I think this looks really inviting. Nice work! Inside is great but outside is a bit cartooney in comparison so could do with more work. It looks like it is photoshopped in so I would take the time to build a fully 3d wall and if you can... a tree. I also feel the colour balance should lean a little more towards warmer. But... really like the interior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronmolina Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Hi, Ben. To add to this, you should fix the over-exposure in the tub. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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