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Really really nice work in general. But i'd expect to see the slided door. Or maybe moved a bit offset from end point to remove the doubt if it is there lol. I like the ceiling, far from show off, nice minimal movements. Besides it may not have enough space inside for the galvanised profiles it's the most practical way to connect the spotlights to electricity there, so it makes a nice practical solution as well.

 

I like your minimalist approach here, i really like the color choises. White, anthracite, beige. The exact colors i use at my home, in exact places so i don't need to tell they're my favorite colors to use. Would really love to see night version of this.

 

At last i have to say, i found the eye prints/drawings idea really inspiring. I'd try something like that in my study room in near future.

 

Cheers,

Kenan Avci.

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two objects seem a bit distracting to me at the moment. First is the wind-swept curtains. I assume the sliding door is open for that to happen, but it seems distracting and gives the false illusion that the cloth is mistakenly overlapped with the glass specially since there's a partial reflection of the eye photos on the glass.

 

Second are those pair of red shoes, that to me just seems out of place and provides additional distraction. I appreciate the intention though, of trying to humanize the space by placing personal articles.

 

Other than that, excellent work and I look forward to see the final product.

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