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  • 4 weeks later...

Looks very good but I think the bottom is a little too yellow and bright. Also the vertical corner strip is getting a little too burned out. The very top of the sky is a little too dark. I think some ceil lights showing through behind the glass would give a nice touch. I would have some business people instead of the people in shorts. I think the glass on the left side of the gray base is getting too chaotic - with the reflection and the tree shadow and the mullions it's just getting too busy. I would simplify it somehow.

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