davismelville Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 Studio/Institution: beyond3dClient: Kad AssociatesGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: c4dvrayDescription: Hi Guys this is a project im currently working on. At the moment im adding in details light poles people etc.. The project is about 80% complete. Feed back is most certainly welcomed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronmolina Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 this is a really cool render, but I would say the wires on the telephone poles are just a little too thick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AubreyM Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 Nice start, I like a lot of the little details. The people are the one thing that I don't think work in this image. It looks like the light should be falling directly on the people but they are in shadow. The hydro poles are too perfect in shape and lack texture, wood poles are never that straight with sharp edges at the top. Good job so far otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davismelville Posted August 2, 2012 Author Share Posted August 2, 2012 Thanks Aubrey. Had the same thought about the people in the image, I think I will put some people walking on the pavement instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davismelville Posted August 2, 2012 Author Share Posted August 2, 2012 Should DOF & vignetting effects be standard in renderings or is that a personal choice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angiliaduan1 Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 Beautiful rendering,and it looks realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronmolina Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 There should definitely be some DOF, but vignette is a personal choice. I don't think this particular image needs it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthewspencer Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 This is looking gorgeous! The tree in back looks a little too neon green, in my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted August 3, 2012 Share Posted August 3, 2012 I agree - the vegetation is a little too saturared -bright. There are a couple of things that you don't need because they are isolated and call attention to themselves - the red hydrant and the manhole cover. You want the main focus to be on your building - not on peripheral objects. The sky looks a little dirty - I would make it a cleaner blue. Also your car looks like it has a matte finish - should have reflections. But the overall building itself looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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