laszlocsanyi Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 Studio/Institution: LaszloGenre: OtherSoftware: 3ds maxDescription: Hello, A small project in my freetime. Perhaps I will finish this one finally. Comments and critics are welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dardanvukaj Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 I think you must add some furniture and live. I don't like the textures and some image don't have a good composition. You can improve lights, colors etc. in post production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marianacaprio Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 The fact that the sky is clear but the house looks dark gives me the impression that it's in the middle of some kind o forrest. Those rocks look a little bit missplaced. Your grass looks great. Perhaps you should add more light, it would help the whole thing look better and show up more. Great job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laszlocsanyi Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 Hi, Thank you for the replies. Here are the final images. I don't want to spend any more time on this image. I have another project now But your thoughts are right. Unfortunately I had only few hours in the evenings. I still could work a lot on this one. But it was a very good practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
passionatajaloszynska Posted October 9, 2012 Share Posted October 9, 2012 Right now, the darker sky is more suitable. It looks better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laszlocsanyi Posted October 9, 2012 Author Share Posted October 9, 2012 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dimitris Tolios Posted October 9, 2012 Share Posted October 9, 2012 Needs more light - either globally or through more / stronger lights on the porch and through the house. Right now it doesn't look as something "desirable" - more like a house from a thriller movie that intrigues you yet scares you. More warm light will make the scenes more lively and inviting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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