utathyaghosh Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 Hello guys! this is my first post on cgarchitect.. i have posted a day render of a residential tower that i have done using 3ds max, vray and photoshop... i would like a few tips for improvement.. Thanx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott Schroeder Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 You have really bright colors and that's throwing things off. Your reds are super red, etc. Try desaturating your whole scene a bit, you can just to this in Photoshop as you have way more control. Your windows are looking a little too dead, try increasing the reflectivity on the glass to catch more of the environment. The glass running down the center spine is desperately in need of some reflections. What is that reflective area in the front? Is that water? If it is, there is no barrier around it and the paving matches the parking lot. So if I come home one night, I could drive right into a fountain or pool? You need to make sure all of your landscape elements match. The tree in the foreground is clearly a fall tree, yet the rest of your foliage is clearly spring/summer. So either the foreground tree is dead or the seasons change as they get closer to your camera. Please, ditch the birds. Why are there always birds in the rendering? Plus, the size of those birds means they must be long lost dragons flying through the air. You need to ensure full continuity between all of the little elements in your scene. You can fix all of the big ticket items like materials and lighting, but you scene will still never look realistic if you overlook the little things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salvador Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 Please, ditch the birds. Why are there always birds in the rendering? Plus, the size of those birds means they must be long lost dragons flying through the air. ha ha ah, true. utathya ghosh, not much to add to Scott's reply, but indeed, the first thing off at a glance for me was the materials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michaelstrauss Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Hello members! I would like to introduce myself as CAD drafter and would like to get answers from forum members. Looking forward to your kind support! Regards Michael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ananyomajumder Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Hi Utathya, as this is your first post its ok... i also lacked quality wise on my first post... as salvador said work on materials. i think you are bengali.. ami jante pari tumi kothae job korcho... kolkata tei thako...?? ekjon bangali arch viz er kaj korche cgarchitect e pawa jae nah tai tomae dekhe khushi holam... hopefully amader modhe cntct hobe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
utathyaghosh Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 Thank you Scott for your invaluable suggestions. One thing i forgot to mention in my previous post was that i wasnt involved in the design aspects of the project. The colors i cannot do anything about except maybe desaturate the whole scene a bit like you said. All the other things you pointed out really helped and i will certainly pay attention to these details from now on. I also did a night time render of this same scene. Do take a look. Thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
utathyaghosh Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 Hello Ananyo! yes i am a bengali. ami kolkata tei thaki.. freelance archviz er kaaj kori nana architectural firms a... akhono student... tumi kothai job koro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ananyomajumder Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 amio kothao job kori na..amio freeliance kori... do you have a facebook profile..tahole details e kotha bolajeto.. tumi parle tomar fb profile er link ta amae frwrd korte paro(ananyo16@gmail.com)...hope to meet you someday.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umesh Raut Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 As VelvetElvis has already elaborated on almost everything, I only would want to find out what exactly you mean by tips on improvement, may be I am wrong but the second render still has same design flaws like the vehicles entering from that (faraway) arch would straight land up (?) in the water body. Also the lights are all same colour and intensity in the whole building. Even on pooja nights that would be a far fetched imagination, at the most. Hope this is taken in the right context and spirit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott Schroeder Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 I think the night shot looks much better than the previous render. You have shown some serious improvement. However, the comment about the pool still stands. You need some sort of fence around the pool. You would never have a pool that close to a parking lot with no sort of fencing. You can still drive right over people sunbathing and into the pool. The buildings in the background being blurred vertically doesn't really do anything for me either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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