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[hardikdhanesha]

Hi, Friends!

this is my first post on cgarchitect.. i have attache 2 render image that auroma team done using 3ds max, vray and photoshop... i would like a few tips for improvement..

 

Thanks,

[Devin Johnston]

First let me say I think these are good images so if you want to do anything with them I'd increase the light level. The overall lighting in the room seems to be too dark compared to the amount of light coming in through the windows. It also wouldn't hurt to increase the contrast in the scene because it looks pretty flat.

[salvador]

Flat indeed and I'd add it's like there only diffuse in the objects. Try some glossy reflections and falloffs, like in the wood and the bedcloth (respectively).

 

Good start.

[braddewald]

The General Discussions section is not the proper place for this thread.

 

If you are looking for critiques for your work, the proper way to do it is to post in the Gallery

[Nic H]

is that a jose parla painting on the wall lol?>

 

https://www.google.com.au/search?hl=en&safe=off&q=jose+parla&ion=1&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_qf.&biw=1421&bih=825&um=1&ie=UTF-8&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=ERFhUPPcHPCTiAeK7oCYBQ

 

dunno why you made it into a ugly triptych

[hardikdhanesha]

Thank you Devin & salvador

Edited September 25, 2012 by hardikdhanesha

[hardikdhanesha]

Ok, Bradley i will Post in gallery. thanks