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[danielarivar]

Studio/Institution: Home(STUDY)
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3ds Max / Mental Ray / Photoshop
Description:

Hello guys, i'm new here so i'm hoping that i'm not doing anything wrong, i'm a new student of 3d and this is my first project for my portfolio, please give your feedback and critiques.

 

Thanks,

Daniel Arivar

Edited November 7, 2012 by danielarivar

[John Dollus]

for the interior, take a look at this image from the Cgarchitect gallery:

http://www.cgarchitect.com/2011/08/notos-september-9-2011

 

It is from a similar angle with similar design characteristics but by paying attention to the arrangement of furnishings, lighting and materials, you can see some pretty big differences.

[AubreyM]

Along with what John said I also think that some of your textures could use a little work. Some are too flat and a couple are over saturated.

It's a good base though and could be a really good image.

[danielarivar]

Hello, Thanks guys, i will make somes changes on this images, i need to get better on render techniques.

[Janwalli]

the indoor render also looks a bit blurry and most important - it feels cold. Thats something I usually would avoid, because even if textures and rendering looks good, a cold feeling usually will make the scenery look uncomfortable.

[kirthaymore]

I think it is a great start but I agree with what John, Aubrey, and Jan stated. If I can add to it, the driveway blocks seem spaced out too far. That would be a bumpy drive. Also I would add some dirt to the top of them seeing that a car has driven on them. Over all, keep up the great work!