brainscan Posted November 20, 2012 Share Posted November 20, 2012 Studio/Institution: MallGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: max, vrayDescription: Hi there i would you like to learn how are my works? Please be honest! I need your advice.. Thank you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainscan Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 I need your comments!! Please share your advice thank you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt McDonald Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 I don't get much sense of the materials from your rendering. Like the roof for example. The color balance of the day time renderings is very yellow, which makes it feel like a hot, unpleasant experience. It looks like you have chosen a sky which has some sort of painterly effect to it but nothing else in the rendering has that feel. It's a bit odd. I noticed that the tires of your cars are often buried in the the asphalt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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