hikemartirosyan Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 (edited) Studio/Institution: N/aGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3ds Max, V-Ray, PhotoshopDescription: It's my student project of casa, and I've wanted to render it with the use of Photosop. It's my first experience. Have a look, please. What's wrong, what's should be corrected. Comments welcome. Thanks! Edited January 31, 2013 by hikemartirosyan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 Nice going with your work. This may be useful: http://alexhogrefe.squarespace.com/the-wet-street-look/?SSScrollPosition=0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Beaulieu Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 I would get the light from the interior to glow a lot more. It looks dull as is. Also find some way to hit it hard with orange. You have a lot of blue going on and the orange will compliment it and punch up the whole image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hikemartirosyan Posted January 30, 2013 Author Share Posted January 30, 2013 Ismael Orozco, thank you very much for these wonderfull tutorials. Make my work easier. Corey Beaulieu, thanks for your advice. I agree with your opinion, orange makes the image more contrast. I've tried to do this. Better ? I've also added a concrete texture to the walls. P.S. In .psd the orange colour is more glowing, than in attached file (jpeg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 http://www.slashfilm.com/orangeblue-contrast-in-movie-posters/ the orange/blue suggestion always makes me smile. I watched transformers part whatever on tv last weekend and it's a great example. I think that's why Michael Bay likes blue eyed actresses with lots of spray tan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hikemartirosyan Posted January 30, 2013 Author Share Posted January 30, 2013 It's looking well, because yellow or orange and blue collours are contrast. If you'll see a colour circle you'll understand. For example green and red are looking fine as well. For example, colours of gucci brand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xEndlessxUrbiax Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 From an architectural standpoint, it looks like the exterior you are looking for is poured in place concrete, although it might be plaster you are looking for, in which case your texture should smooth out a little more. To add realism to the image, if it is poured in place concrete, you need to add construction joints in the walls (you have them on your driveway, well actually these are control joints). Basically, they can't pour the whole thing at once so whoever is building this thing will need to pour in stages. That's where the joints should go. Any intersection of wall/roof/slab is a good start. I would add these in Photoshop since the building is far away enough from the camera. I find the tire tracks on the driveway a little distracting, my eye wants to follow them and see where the driver was swerving. I would tone these down, especially on the edge of the driveway, or get rid of them entirely. The reflection on the driveway makes it seem like it recently rained but in reality, this reflective water will tend to puddle. I would look into using a reflection map to get this effect to work better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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