kirthaymore Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Studio/Institution: N/AGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3ds Max 2012, VRay, PhotoshopWebsite: http://kirthaymore.com/Description: here is the latest update; let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisztian Gulyas Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 (edited) Much better than it was before. Try putting more lights in the pool. Look for houses with swimming pools, those are well lit and look good. http://www.alinskie.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Luxury-Vineyard-Villa-Outdoor-Swimming-Pool-Night-View.jpg Make the lights brighter (in the pool). IMO it looks a bit dull. It looks like the pool (and the whole rooftop) is floating in the air. Maybe you should put in a picture of a city where the pool ends so it will look like its on the top of a skyscraper. Edited February 1, 2013 by krisztiangulyas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisztian Gulyas Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Just an idea. You can put in more buildings (you'll have to cut the image around the trees), make it brighter, but its not hard in photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirthaymore Posted February 1, 2013 Author Share Posted February 1, 2013 thank you for the feedback Krisztian! I will add a couple more lights tonight and do some Photoshop work, as I like the high-rise idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirthaymore Posted February 2, 2013 Author Share Posted February 2, 2013 here is the latest update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisztian Gulyas Posted February 3, 2013 Share Posted February 3, 2013 (edited) I would play whit the contrast. The image could be pretty dark where there's no light and brighter where there are lights and try changing the vibrance/saturation level a bit in photoshop (a little bit) just to make the colors brighter. You need some dramatic effects to make the image intresting. The image looks better with every update though. Edited February 3, 2013 by krisztiangulyas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirthaymore Posted February 3, 2013 Author Share Posted February 3, 2013 Hi Krisztian, Thank you for all the advice and helping me to push further with my image! It has been a huge help and I learned to step out of my "comfort zone" and take some risks. It has paid off and this image has come a long way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisztian Gulyas Posted February 3, 2013 Share Posted February 3, 2013 You're welcome. I'm glad I could help, you did a good job with this image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted February 3, 2013 Share Posted February 3, 2013 (edited) I played with the general idea of your render and came up with these: Overcast day Overcast Dusk More Sunny Edited February 4, 2013 by Ismael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirthaymore Posted February 4, 2013 Author Share Posted February 4, 2013 Hi Ismael, thanks for sharing as it is always interesting to see other takes on a particular project. I would love to see a final render on your take. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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