my first render (salon interior)

[Hussam_CG]

hi renderers

this is my first render to post in this forum,

 

 

I've made this salon interior lately, it's still a WIP

hope you like it,

well,I'm still new to rendering with Vray ,

so I hope you bear with me

I hope that you experts guide me through this with tips or comments that could make my renders look better,

C & C are so welcome

 

Hussam

[vru]

looks really good. You can change the sequence of books in your shelf. The identical arrangement is disturbing.

 

Vrushali

[Hussam_CG]

thanks

 

this is still a WIP , and of course I'll change the books arrangement later

 

hope for other comments to make this better

Hussam

[mohamedberry]

hey Hosam, nice work there....

 

i think there is something wrong with your window, its overshoted by a light from the inside (i suppose its the sun from the outside) besides it should cast some chairs shadows on the ground wich i couldnt find. the light in the back is fantastic, materials of the chairs & couch still needs some materials work... another little thing, the books shelves, i think there is no way that it could reach the ceiling slab, u may lower it a little and give the wood (or plastic) some materials.

 

I hope you find my comments helpful for you to improve

 

Regards

[Drik Kriagson]

hte rendering is nice. the window casting the light in is off.. there should be brighter light coming in (if is showing in the day time). also the sofa seem to hard to sit on

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