kirthaymore Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Studio/Institution: N/AGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds Max 2012, VRay, PhotoshopWebsite: http://kirthaymore.com/Description: Hi Everyone. I wanted to create a simplistic indoor scene that would help me focus on my lighting and texturing skills. I wanted to combine a variety of surfaces; wood, metal, water, rug and so on. I welcome your thoughts and advise to help me push my skills further. I would like to get to a point when my renderings are on the side of photo realism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Its a good concept. Im not too sure on the amount of bump you are using on the wall to the left. Seems a bit too bumpy too me. Also my attention went straight to that glowing light haze. I honestly am not sure if its a good or a bad thing or how you might want to go about it. Might be too much perhaps? Also the wood seems too saturated. You're rendering in Mental Ray I gather? haha get it? Um... are you tinkering with you're gamma? Other wise I like the idea you're going for here. The lighting in general looks pretty good and congrats on youre fur carpet. I was messing with that for the first time in months and cant seem to get a decent render out of it I liked Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sachinwalvekar Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Hi Kirt, I would want to suggest working on the light coming down......I think they are very focused straight....would be better to have them spread out into a soft arc on wall. The vibrant light for TRANQUILITY, would add to the scene if its as subdued. Other than that I liked the scene composition. Good Luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirthaymore Posted February 28, 2013 Author Share Posted February 28, 2013 Thank you Jason and Sachin for your input; it helps to have other eyes take a look at your work every once in a while! I was attempting to go for a cool water wall look with the TRANQUILITY sign behind it. I am still trying to play around with it. I started a water study so I can hopefully come up with a good solution for the wall. Jason, I had some trouble with getting the rug to look good as well but I found some great tips in the latest issue of 3D World magazine, titled The Future of Arch-Viz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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