Sourpickles Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Studio/Institution: Jason ArtsGenre: Commercial InteriorSoftware: 3DS MaxWebsite: http://www.jasonarts.comDescription: Hey guys I havent posted any thing in here in some time. I been starting things back up and thought I might get some ideas on what I have so far. I have 3 ideas of things I would like to create and this is the first one. It's just a basic white room with 3 large windows and some furniture. I got tired of texturing so a few things still need that. I just wanted to light it and see what I had going. So here is what I have. I like the way the plant casts it's shadows over the couch. I also modeled this all my self except for the plant. I believe it came from a 3DWorld pack. Any ideas, critiques are welcomed. Im still planning on adding a few things to the upper shelf and some sort of sidewalk or some thing to the out side window area. Also a few settings Photographic Exp Shutter Speed - 2.0 Aperture - 9.5 Fild Speed - 100 Highlight - 0.25 Midtones - .8 Shadows - .25 Im rendering at a low setting thats what the crap rez by the way. GI Photon samples - 2500 Max radius 1" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted March 3, 2013 Author Share Posted March 3, 2013 I have a composite made up....feel like it's missing a little some thing but the lighting came out great. I was having some artifacting going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted March 3, 2013 Author Share Posted March 3, 2013 83 views...either its pretty damn good or its pretty damn bad to not get anything lol so....anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xEndlessxUrbiax Posted March 7, 2013 Share Posted March 7, 2013 The rendering is really nice, so is the modeling. I can't see anything I would change except I keep wondering why the image is to cropped on the couch, I want to see more of the room. Also the rug on the bottom seems like it needs to be worked on texturally. Good lighting and materials though. Nice base molding and I like that you even included the electric wire for the lamp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexandrah Posted March 7, 2013 Share Posted March 7, 2013 hello Jason, the objects looks nice, except the "books" and the lamp, they look cartoony. I like the couch. Maybe you should test the scene with some sky portal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andstef Posted March 8, 2013 Share Posted March 8, 2013 The whole composition of this shot will look better if the image weren't cropped so much, like Adrien said, wider camera lens, or move the camera back. The carpet in front of the couch should have more detail, try fur or displacement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted March 8, 2013 Author Share Posted March 8, 2013 Hey guys thanks I had to test on some things for work so havent had time to check here. I'll see what I can do about pulling the camera back some. The carpet....yea... I tried a few things for that until I got what I have. I was going with a short short fur to it and it just never seemed to want to look right. I didnt try displacement though. Maybe thats the thing to try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Francisco Penaloza Posted March 8, 2013 Share Posted March 8, 2013 although the second image look lots better than the first one, I am not sure if you really need to deal with GI(photons) for this scene, Final Gather will do just fine, just increase the point of density to get a fine detail. Carpet need better texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronmolina Posted March 9, 2013 Share Posted March 9, 2013 Really nice render! I would add a couple of small pegs under the book shelf on the wall to add to the realism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted March 11, 2013 Author Share Posted March 11, 2013 OK guys. I pull the camera back, used hair/fur on the carpeting. Added brackets to the shelving aannnddd..... yup...bout it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bindunarayan Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Simple yet appealing is the feeling that came into my mind when I saw your last interior design rendering with some minor adjustments as compared to the first few images. It is simply superb. Excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexandrah Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 it looks very real, i like it. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted March 12, 2013 Author Share Posted March 12, 2013 Thanks guys! took a year off of really finishing my projects to just look into other peoples techniques and ways of modeling. Ive got lots of other ideas I'd like to do and just wanted to start off small but sharp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 looking good man! The final render that you posted made all of the difference... Maybe add in a touch of depth of field? Only thing i could think of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 thanks im started on an external scene of my current building I work in. Im going to throw up a shot or two in the next few days. You work in Orlando? Im in Tampa now but Im interested in finding some thinkin Orlando. I know I can get way better pay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 Oh cool cool man! That will be interesting to see! Im about to start a WIP of my own on a scene i modeled. Im actually a student at Full Sail in Orlando. Im in the Computer Animation degree program. Are you currently working in the industry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 sort of.... Im in the graphic design dept waiting for a hole....only its been a year and no holes yet. They are hiring every thing but in 3D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 Ahh I see I see.. What brought you into the 3d industry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 Im good at it, I enjoy it, I like modeling, creating and saying I did that. Been wanting this since I was in 9th grade and saw an animation in Science class....like 1992/3 or so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 Amen to that! I really enjoy it.. I cant see myself doing anything else except 3D. Im really starting to like 3d Architectural Viz. This site has really inspired me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 well unfortunately this field still isnt exactly hiring. Especially in Florida. I have friends in Denver and big Arch Firms but they cant help me out because they are worried about their jobs still. I use to see lots of postings every month....now I see maybe 2 or 3 in Florida a month. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 I see I see.. Well when I graduate im open to moving wherever I can get hired. Options are limitless at that point! Do you have an online portfolio or anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 Just read this... http://www.egmnow.com/articles/news/ea-studios-hit-with-another-round-of-layoffs/ This is my portfolio site...http://www.jasonarts.com.... grab me on linkedin if you want, anyone on here can for that matter. Lets fine me some work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 Ok cool! thanks for the info and ill definitely add you on linkedin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 sounds good...I just found out that email address hasnt been forwarding to me in who knows how long....its been maybe 2 yrs since I gotten a freelance job through that email. im vvvvvvery pissed! grrr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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