diegopeixoto Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Studio/Institution: Diego PeixotoClient: CentromedGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: 3DS Max 2013Description: Hello everybody This is my first project with visual, I know you have some errors as glass and so on. But I'm constantly evolving. I need criticism. thank you Image before post-processing: http://i.imgur.com/XkSofTi.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Shaun Hamm Posted March 1, 2013 Share Posted March 1, 2013 The image composition feels too cropped...having about 2/3 building and 1/3 sky would look better. Pavement is too dark and the truck centered in the view is distracting and blocks the building too much. Perhaps have it over to the side and use a lighter paint material on it. A nice start though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diegopeixoto Posted March 1, 2013 Author Share Posted March 1, 2013 Thanks, Shaun. It needed to be croped. Thanks for your C&C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joelgodin Posted March 19, 2013 Share Posted March 19, 2013 Maybe move the truck and to give a traffic feel just have the nose of a car coming in. I want to see the building. Sun seems to be over on the right looking at the viewer, but the shadows show sun from behind. Maybe some more beveling to cut down on some of the sharp edges. Keep going, it will be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angiliaduan1 Posted March 19, 2013 Share Posted March 19, 2013 Feel the right side has too much lighting,overexposure maybe.And make some plants on the foreground will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilderbaurendering Posted March 19, 2013 Share Posted March 19, 2013 hi Diego, there is still staff to improve but its on the way .) I would suggest less contrast (desaturate especially red) and some nice sky -there is something dark around the building edge. bb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diegopeixoto Posted March 19, 2013 Author Share Posted March 19, 2013 Thanks for the tip, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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