tamasbendo Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 (edited) Studio/Institution: n/aGenre: Commercial InteriorSoftware: Sketchup, 3DS Max, Vray, PhotoshopDescription: Greetings I'm new in this forum and also in 3D modeling. I think it's the right place to show off my first rendering using VRay for Sketchup. This scene is actually representing my own bedroom. Any critics, advices are more than welcomed. (and I surely need them) The whole scene is modeled in Sketchup except the pillow which is made in 3DS Max. Edited April 1, 2013 by tamasbendo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christofferthulin Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 First off, really nice rendering. I like the objects in the forground alot, they look realistic. What I think makes this rendering look like a render and not a photo is first of all the door. I think it's the glass material that so obviously has a noise map in the bump slot. Play around with that, perhaps lower the bump value and mix it with some other map. The bed lamp looks a bit flat and too cartoony and the pillows is a bit stiff. Add some details to the pillows. A quick fix is to just add a FFD box to the pillow and play around with the control points to make it look less stiffer. I don't really understand the angle of the camera and the composition of the picture. Maybe you can find a different angle which makes the picture more interesting. If you want a central perspective as it is now you should perhaps make the background wall be horizontal and the lines be pararell to eachother. I never used vray with sketchup so I am not certain of the possibilities. Nice work anyway! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tamasbendo Posted March 16, 2013 Author Share Posted March 16, 2013 Thanks for the suggestion. The door's glass is a bit unrealistic indeed, it has a noise map only. I'm planning to model a more realistic looking pillow that will help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sachinwalvekar Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Hi Tamas, Christoffer has already given very good suggestions. I would suggest you add more items to the scene to develop more interest in the scene. A good scene otherwise. Warm Regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tamasbendo Posted April 1, 2013 Author Share Posted April 1, 2013 I did some changes on the scene, also added some more objects. Scene lighting is a bit different, but I think it turned out pretty well. Suggestions and critics are welcomed, as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christofferthulin Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 Very nice! Looking good. The only comment I can give you is the composition and angle of the camera. I am not a fan of the camera looking down. I think you should play around with the fov of the camera and as well the height of the camera position. Even if it sometimes is preferable to have the camera in eye height it's not always the best choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angiliaduan1 Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Nice rendering,the lighting in the scene feels comfortable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meherthakker Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 the render looks good mate !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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