tips, suggestions, opinion

[mariosantana]

hello everyone

I just wanted your opinion on this image. what bothers you, what would you fix/change, anything ?

 

Im using Vray 1.5 for rhino 5 that's why i posted this here. Btw i used a HDRI plus vray sun. thank for your comments.

[Francisco Penaloza]

This image as an exercise to learn VRay seems fine, although you still have some low quality GI in the corners (Ceilings/walls) easy to fix.

Now from an ArchViz point of view, this image is very poor, scale seems strange, although I know small places like this one, but I would not use that type of furniture for it. Floor texture seems strange, to glossy, bump is too accentuated, maybe in the wrong areas. There is not depth or colors or story or anything that make this image appealing or interesting to the viewer.

Try to search on the gallery of this same website, look for the Best of the week renderings, read some Architectural photographers books, magazines, shoot open an IKEA flyer and see how they present theirs products and try to imitate that, ask your self why is that, why the colors, why that lighting and keep trying. Nothing is free, nothing is easy, no magic click render button, but that's the beauty of it right;)

[mariosantana]

Thank you! Now I have a lot to work on. What would improve the low GI on the corners? I'm mean from vray not photoshop.