Wip of Exteriors and interiors. Need suggestions for improvement

[sandeepricky3d]

Studio/Institution: Personal
Genre: Other
Software: 3ds Max, Vray, photoshop
Description:

 

 

I made these images with lot of dedication and was very proud of them ( made on a crappy laptop 2gb ram) and thought I will get a decent job. Applied to my dream studio in India. But my application got rejected:(. They told this is very basic work

 

So, now the situation is this I need you fellas to help me to fulfill my dream that is to produce awesome renders and get the job at my dream studio (here in India). I want honest critics from you guys to improve my work.

 

Thanks and regards

Sandeep Singh

 

 

PS: How to add more images in existing Thread??

Edited June 10, 2013 by sandeepricky3d

[5ran]

Hi Sandeep,

I think you should work a lot on your lighting and materials.

Lighting: there is a lack of detail in your lighting caused by the rendering setup, I think. Try to go through some profesional archwiz tutorial (there are plenty of them on the market). Work on your understanding of the Irradiance map settings - bad setup can destroy all the light contrast in your scene.

Vray sun+sky is the best start to work with in the archwiz industry. Try to work with windows vray light portal in interior renderings.

 

materials: try to search the web for reference photos (google image search is a miracle). Keep focus on the right scale and high quality of your textures.

 

I hope this will help a bit.

Cheers,

David