leebano1 Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 Hi all, my name is Lee Bano and I'm a 3d designer located in Brazil. Here's one of my jobs in 3d with 3ds Max, vRay2.4 and PS. C&C are welcome. Thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meherthakker Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 welcome to cga mate..!! nicely rendered image..keep up the good work !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cg_Butler Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 (edited) Welcome. I would say it's a good start. It needs some life as it looks unused and empty. Turn on the ceiling lights to get some light in the space, the right type of people would help with scale and the feeling of the space. The stone texture on the left looks flat. This needs to either be modeled or get a displacement map on it. I'd also be tempted to put some trees or bamboo or some sort of foliage behind the rear walls to soften the wall and skyline. There is also a funny join line between the main header and the post in the corner and the grey tile strip doesn't look like it lines up with the cream tiles below and has a funny row of small tiles along the bottom. Adjust the height of this geometry so there are either two or three tiles. It's these small things that make a difference. Edited July 8, 2013 by cg_Butler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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