MohammedYusuf Posted July 27, 2013 Share Posted July 27, 2013 Studio/Institution: Render ImageGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max, vrayWebsite: http://www.renderimage.inDescription: Hi, Bedroom rendered in 3ds max 2009 and V-ray 1.5 sp2. I didnt do any photoshop work except the watermark..comments & critics are welcome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted July 27, 2013 Share Posted July 27, 2013 Hi - Being Mexican I like your Diego Rivera paintings. It looks good but here are my comments. Bed looks too solid - like it's made of plastic or rubber. The edging on the left side looks too pointy. Pillows look like they are floating because there is a shadow under them. Chair looks too big - long Brick map shading is awkward - there's shadows on it that don't correspond to the lighting - just flipping it I think would be an improvement. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MohammedYusuf Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 Thanks very much George fr ur valuable comments..u said about flipping...i didnt get that...is there any option of flipping..pls explain me that..i wud be thankful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 I meant flipping the brick map horizontally so that the brick shadows would be cast to the left which is what would happen since your light source is coming from the right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MohammedYusuf Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 Oh i see..got it now...thanks very much..can u give me some links of tutorials about texturing..i think i have to improve a lot as far as texturing is concerned...thanks in advance.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meherthakker Posted August 13, 2013 Share Posted August 13, 2013 nice work mohammed..I like the lighting mood !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerfitch Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 I think this piece is awesome.. I love the mood and the texturing is super nice also. The pillows do look a bit floaty but thats a simple fix. I also agree with the char. The part where your bum goes looks a bit long.. Could be from the FOV of the camera? Overall though, excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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