Cafe lobby area

[jasonlg3d]

Im new to this forum. Could you guys give me some tips on this image. It is a small lobby area for a teen facility. I have no control over wall graphics. The tile is not right yet since I am still waiting on word from the client on the correct color and style. Could you crit my lighting and anything else? Thanks

[voltaire_ira]

hi,

 

-your floor tiles need some work.its quite big and the grout is too big.

-what's the blue box for?(is it your reference for the tiles)if so, then your tiles are big

-lighting needs more work.what renderer did you use or is it scanline radiosity.

-i like the graphic wall.

[Brian Cassil]

I have to assume that there are some design elements that are not in place yet because the space looks very empty. Is there supposed to be anything on the walls? Maybe some more furniture would help. Also, surely there are supposed to be some light fixtures in the ceiling.

[jasonlg3d]

I guess I wasnt clear enough on how preliminary this is. I do not have a lot of control over most of the design elements as i am just doing a visualization of their ideas. The tile is 20"x20" so it is rather large. The blue box was a reference for the tiles. The ceiling is an open ceiling exposing metal rafter and I'm wandering if time should be taken to do that part. The purpose of this is to give them a general idea of what it will look like and to drum up support(and donations) for the remodelling. Any suggestions on lighting? I am sticking with scanline since a fly thru will eventually be done and I only have one computer to render on.