jbOS Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 Studio/Institution: Self....Genre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds Max, Vray, Photoshop, After EffectsDescription: Hey, Thought I would quickly post this image I have been working on for a couple of days for some advice/critiquing. Please fire away and let me know what you think. This is my first time so please be kind...... The Depth of Field is pretty heavy but I am a sucker for this in all the photography I do so thought I would apply it to this image as well. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notamondayfan Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 Hey mate, hows things over in Manchester?! Our Studio keeping you busy? Crit - The only thing that jumped out at me was the repeating pattern on the right sofa, and cushions on the far sofa look a bit odd, don't know if its their form or colour of the smaller ones, but something looks amiss. Also I'd be tempted to try the books in white / grey as my eye is immediately drawn to them. Looks good though mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 Table material is a bit vague. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbOS Posted August 30, 2013 Author Share Posted August 30, 2013 Dean - Yeah, pretty busy over here. Just had a few hours free so knocked this image up quickly. Cheers for the comments. I think the cushions on the far sofa look odd as they have pretty large gaps between them. I will widen them to fill them up. How are you? Have you been busy since we last spoke? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notamondayfan Posted August 31, 2013 Share Posted August 31, 2013 Aye been pretty busy this year! Bloody shattered, but it's all good!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idanamrany1 Posted September 9, 2013 Share Posted September 9, 2013 Hi James! The over all image looks good I think maybe there is to much white reflections on the table... By the way I like the DOF effect, did you do it in the render or in after effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbOS Posted September 18, 2013 Author Share Posted September 18, 2013 Hey SA, Yeah the DOF was done in After Effects using the Frischluft plugin. Find it so easy to use with great results... Cheers, James Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted September 19, 2013 Share Posted September 19, 2013 I think the blurred stuff above the couch isn't working. There's gaps between the pillows, the mulls are spaced differently, they are different grays, one is broken, the ceiling light looks strange; all this calls attention to the back which should be neutral to let the foregound shine. The kitchen part is ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandozawire Posted October 30, 2013 Share Posted October 30, 2013 Looks great so far... very promising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benjaminbogaert Posted October 31, 2013 Share Posted October 31, 2013 A nice looking still, maybe reduce the darkness between the gaps of the cough.. did you work with passes? if so this can easly be adjusted. Second, if your using Bokeh effect you might want to brighten up the white from you windows even more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maurocaruana Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nileshbhagwat Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 wow nice rendering and nice depth of field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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