kennysyverson Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 Studio/Institution: Kenny SyversonGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: Modo Maxwell renderDescription: Would like to get some feed back on this project. Thanks Kenny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 As you'd expect with Maxwell the lighting is lovely. I think with some work on the trees it would be a much better image. The only thing dragging the image down is the poor tree modeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hris Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 I agree with Tom Livings - lighting is great and mood is sos cool. But trees should be more realistic. Congratulations - it's very nice render! Greetings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kennysyverson Posted October 22, 2013 Author Share Posted October 22, 2013 Thanks guys for the feed back! So what about the trees that's dragging it down, is it the leaves? The Color? The Shape? Once again thanks for the CC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted October 22, 2013 Share Posted October 22, 2013 (edited) in the first shot, it appears the leaves are oriented 'on edge' toward the camera which looks rather unnatural. Apart from that, the trees don't really bother me. Overall, the series seems rather lifeless and apocalyptic though and doesn't really seem to sell the structure. When looking at the actual facility, the façade is so much more vibrant and inviting. Edited October 22, 2013 by John Dollus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephen Thomas Posted October 22, 2013 Share Posted October 22, 2013 I'm a sucker for a bit of colour contrast. A nice green-ish tint to the interiors would work well with the pink dusk lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest calumreid Posted October 23, 2013 Share Posted October 23, 2013 lifeless and apocalyptic That's what you want! That is the atmosphere here in Aberdeen Oh and make the image more grey, nobody here tolerates anything with colour, we fear change! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandozawire Posted October 30, 2013 Share Posted October 30, 2013 Very clean model. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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