Exterior - need for feedback

[gstovell]

Studio/Institution: 59 degree studios
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: C4D & VRAY
Description:

This is a night scene I'm working on based on the garage from Ferris Bueller's Day Off movie.

First night scene in VRAY. Would love some feedback to better this piece.

Thanks!

-g

[Matt McDonald]

Lighting might be a little too gray or maybe there isn't enough contrast, I dunno it's really difficult to make out what is happening at the ground level.

 

Not a fan of the dead tree limb in the upper left corner.

 

I think the glass might be too reflective. All of the reflections make it hard to understand what is going on in the interior.

 

And I don't know if you are trying to add some grunge to the white i-beams or if it is a rendering error but it makes the building look dirty which sort of works against the modern aesthetic (IMO)

[christofferthulin]

Feels like you are four meters tall. Lower the camera to eye height and put on some vertical shift.

[gandozawire]

Brilliant! I love the proportions.

[TomD_Arch]

I've actually been to the house and garage building (car museum for the original owner). I might be able to dig up some reference photo's, if you want. Let me know.

 

Otherwise I really like the rendering. The driveway is a little thin looking, in terms of structural slab thickness.

Edited November 14, 2013 by thomas.denney@gmail.com