TomD_Arch Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 Studio/Institution: For a public works projectGenre: InstitutionSoftware: 3ds Max, PhotoshopDescription: This is now finished as far as work and my boss is concerned, however I would like to keep working on some aspects, the grass for one. I thought maybe I could run it through here and see what comments I get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devin Johnston Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 People and cars will help to give it some life, you might also want to look at adjusting the view to show more sky because it feel a little cut off to me. Since the road is such a prominent feature in the rendering taking up at least a third of the overall image it wouldn't hurt to spend some time texturing it. 3D grass around the building along with some low bushes in the foreground would help, and a more saturated sky would help to make the image stand out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himanshuchoudhary Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 The sun seems to be exactly above the camera, which, or me doesnt work. Its always good to try the sun coming from a different direction, just to get a bit of play of shadows happening. And as Devin mentioned, more sky.. texturing road, bushes, grass, people, etc Maybe you could tweak the contrast a bit in photoshop. Goodluck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Francisco Penaloza Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 all the comments above, plus your trees leaf are too green, perfect green, paint some color variation in Photoshop and lower the saturation a little, actually add a little red on them or blue to make it more balanced. and please ditch the Chromatic aberration, it is way to strong, now it look more like a stereoscopic image than a cheap camera lens. Aberrations occurs mostly on the edges of the image in high contrast areas on "some lens" not always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 I would crop in the sides since it's so long. I think the trees are too big and they are over-powering/blocking the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benjaminbogaert Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 I would make the tree's in front of the building transparant. Maybe add some foliage in the front with a slight blur over it to give a sense of depth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomD_Arch Posted November 22, 2013 Author Share Posted November 22, 2013 Sorry for taking so long to acknowledge your comments. All are very legitimate and helpful. Now I just need to make the time to get back into teh file and play around a bit more. Thank you all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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