ekkisaputra Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 Studio/Institution: College ProjectClient: NoneGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: Sketchup + Vray + PSWebsite: http://NoneDescription: Hello, it's my first time post and im still beginner about design i need more advice for my improvement thank you very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 Hi, I like the variety of textures. I think the rain is looking more like a texture than real rain. The car with the bright lights is drawing too much attention to itself. The street puddles aren't working - it looks more like cow hide. I don't think the telephone pole should be dead center. Some of the lines are perfectly straight - they should sag a little. Also that one single ac unit - so white - might be a little more subdued. But I like the overall feel/mood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ekkisaputra Posted December 17, 2013 Author Share Posted December 17, 2013 thank you very much sir i'll fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoseinasadi Posted January 19, 2014 Share Posted January 19, 2014 i too like the mood.keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
javierlopez Posted January 28, 2014 Share Posted January 28, 2014 Love it! What about adding some organic details? Some plants, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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