Another view, but with 3 different version.

[antoniogarcia]

Studio/Institution: NFO
Client: NFO
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3ds Max + Vray + Photoshop
Description:

Hello everyone!!

Here the new view that I have done during the last month. The project is for NFO office of Zagreb (one month ago I showed other view) This is the same view but with 3 different version: Sunny day, deep fog and night.

 

 

 

 

 

I have done the different version to improve my skills. little by little :-).

I did the model in Sketchup, rendering in 3ds max + Vray and post-produced in Photoshop (the process more lasting).

 

Here my blog: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/

[jensandersen]

Hi Antonio

 

Nice improvements to both view and mood vs the first post I saw the project in.

I think the sunny and foggy ones has more qualities to them. In the sunny one it looks like it has been raining earlier in the day. You might want to give the black facade a bit of a glossy look to match the reflective wet street.

In the night render, there is something just a bit off with the lighting. Try and dim the street/fence/other buildings a bit down and the same with the lady on the balcony. You might also want to use the burn tool on photoshop on the trees as they still seem like they are lit from sunlight.

 

Keep up the good work!

[antoniogarcia]

Thank you Jens Andersen for your advice.

I will improve it. it is difficult to see these mistakes because my eyes haven´t learnt to see it. Little by little

[markjardine]

These look awesome, but the first thing I noticed in the foggy image is the slight shadow to the left of the building. It makes the sky look flat almost like the building is up against a wall. Try removing that shadow.