Jelle Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 Hello C&c welcome on this kitchen, a personal thing I'm working on. There are some minor artifacts I know. I'm not a designer or architect, just 3D guy. Modelled, textured and rendered in Cinema 4D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 good!, so real, i don't like the white pots, try to put more modern stuff and a couple more of details.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SEIF Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 hmm...in general its very nice ( as a rendering )..there are some very good items...reflection on the floor is great....texturing is nice...although itys seems that marble tops are a bit out-scaled.. nowfor real comments... 1. what does that far unit do standing alone??...its just bothring the space... 2. in kitchen these has to be a lower skirting protecting cabinets from water...in your model there is no such thing...wood is clearly settled on the floor.. 3. Wood material of the cabinets is TOO shiny and reflective...not giving that dimm effect...the image overall needs some contrast.. 4. The right window has too much glow wich is not in proportion with light entring the kitchen...needs to be fixed i guess.. 5. The arche windowjust above the marble top isnt looking good...also it cant look like that as u didnt put the back splash marble piece above the marble tops in connection with the walls.. sorry for being harsh...but as u said u r not an architect nor a designer...so these comments are regarding the Design issue rather than the presentation one as u see... i think thats all for now..hoping of a soon upate....k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pmanahan Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 the first things I noticed was that the oven did not look deep enough and the cabinets on the wall doors don't meet, the knobs are usually next to each other. I would try a picture on the wall between the oven and the window. The left half of your picture looks very good, bright and friendly while the right half looks very dark and depressing. Overall, nice job. pmanahan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelle Posted October 22, 2004 Author Share Posted October 22, 2004 Thanks Well I must admit the critism I wanted was mostly aimed at execution and rendering not so much design. I was just looking some photos for ref. while not being 100% loyal. But I`ll take things into consideration for updates. THanks so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelle Posted October 27, 2004 Author Share Posted October 27, 2004 I sort of remade the whole scene. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted October 27, 2004 Share Posted October 27, 2004 looks ok, but some AA issues in there to resolve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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