WIP: commercial center

[markostojkovic]

Studio/Institution: renderus
Genre: Commercial Exterior
Software: 3ds max
Website: http://renderus.com/
Description:

Hi There,

 

I just started my personal work. I am trying to make commercial center with some mystic,dusk mood.

This is still 3d modeling phase. Still need to add some details and start postproduction.

Also, I am trying to get best camera angle, so I would like to hear your opinion.

C&C are welcome.

 

Edited May 11, 2014 by markostojkovic

[heni30]

Hi Marko - nice. I just thought the images were too gray and the building didn't assert itself enough.

 

[markostojkovic]

Thanks George

I agree that building should stand out. Thanks for image adjustment.

I will make image with more vibrant colors and contrast in postproduction.

[markostojkovic]

I started postproduction. Still need to add more details on building(interior elements), promenade and to make some foreground.

 

[heni30]

Hey Marko,

 

For my subjective taste it's a little too contrasty. When looking at an image your eye is attracted to the area of most contrast. Right now I think the sky is calling too much attention to itself. but that's just me.

[markostojkovic]

Thank you George.

I tried to make silhouette effect here, so I made sky more contrast. I have put promenade as foreground and some particles.

 

Hope you like it.

 

[heni30]

Marko -

 

very cool.

 

It has this fantasy, children's book feel to it, very artistic. It's a little close to being too much (too many glows) but I like it.

 

I like the dog pulling, wanting to jump in the water and get those swans.

Edited May 19, 2014 by heni30

[Zdravko Barisic]

The railing, in the front, is crowded the whole image. Just remove it, or move camera closer, with wider view angle.

Otherwise, perfect...

But, when I look at it again, I would complete remove WATER! You know what I am talking about...

For those who do not know, yet...

Edited May 19, 2014 by okmijun

[markostojkovic]

George,

Thanks, I am glad that you noticed the dog chasing the swans .

I tried to make some fantasy mood. I agree that there are too much glows, should be reduced.

 

Zdravko,

Thank you. Yes I know what you talking about. But this was created before the floods in Serbia. I should probably make a version without water, with sunny meadow .