antoniogarcia Posted June 6, 2014 Share Posted June 6, 2014 Studio/Institution: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/Genre: OtherSoftware: 3ds Max + Vray + PhotoshopWebsite: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/Description: Hi everyone!! Here my last work. This render has been done only to practice and improve my skills. A building without use in wherever. Feel free to critique it and show me the mistakes that I can't see. I suppose that they will be a lot. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 the sinking cow to the front left, you must have seen that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 More cowbell the sinking cow to the front left, you must have seen that. Oh, come on, she's standing in tall grass, Tommy. Still, it does look odd. The picture would balance better if you took the clouds out of the upper left of the sky, so the tower portion had a solid field to live in. Also, perhaps differentiate the glass top-to-bottom, a little darker at the base, more sky reflection (no clouds though, just tone) towards the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 If you want to keep the cow Id put it in the background. But there no client so you can do what you like really. I agree with the above and would ad that you have some tiling issues on the left facade and legibility issues on the front, I can really tell how the building fabric works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antoniogarcia Posted June 8, 2014 Author Share Posted June 8, 2014 Tom, the cow is only a detail. I have changed it to the background to do it least important, more back. About the tiling issues in the concrete, I tried to improve it in Photoshop. I am agree about the legibility issues on the front. I didn't see it. I have given more importance to the different element: blinds facades, floor structure and glass railing. Giving it a easy legibility and clear, I hope. Thank you Ernest, for your tips. I have changed the glass and cloud like you told me. Also I have changed the general ambient of the render, to do a second version of it. I will Play with the render more to get better vesions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antoniogarcia Posted June 14, 2014 Author Share Posted June 14, 2014 A second version the first render. A version of night. I like it 50%. I don't get to see where the mistakes are. I will have to learn and practice more and more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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