rbcameron Posted September 25, 2014 Share Posted September 25, 2014 Studio/Institution: RBC ArchitectsClient: N/AGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: Revit + 3dsMaxWebsite: http://www.turbosquid.com/Search/Artists/3d-medical-equipment?sort_column=A5&sort_order=descDescription: Just a test rendering of a healing center. Trying to figure out what to do next. I'm missing a lot of detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted September 25, 2014 Share Posted September 25, 2014 First step would be to bet rid of your DOF. Very distracting. You really wouldn't have any this far away. It looks like it's all around like a vignette. I would also pull back room to give the building some breathing space - more sky, more forground. The underside of the hor panels is way too dark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cesar R Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 I like the reflections on the glassing. Is it a texture map? BTW, I would get rid of the Revit grass. I really hate that map overall. Model some grass (you can paint it very easily in max). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nileshbhagwat Posted October 30, 2014 Share Posted October 30, 2014 yeah just rid off the depth of field rest is fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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