sai4u9 Posted September 27, 2014 Share Posted September 27, 2014 Studio/Institution: PersonalGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3ds Max, Mental RayDescription: I finalized this 3d. Before submitting to the client I want to hear the comments & feed back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marlonmorgan Posted October 8, 2014 Share Posted October 8, 2014 Looks okay. Nothing fancy but still clean. Don't know what kind of look or feel you were trying to achieve so it's a bit hard to give feedback. If it's photo-realism, then i'd say it could take some more work... But if it's to get an idea of what the structure should look like at the end of construction then i'd say it's a good go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted October 8, 2014 Share Posted October 8, 2014 Two quick things. The building needs some breathing room on all sides; feels like it's shoe-horned (squeezed) into the frame. Light source is too dead center on the corner which is not the best way to define geometry or create a mood. If you look at the corner you'll see the tones on both sides are the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thomaschristensen Posted October 8, 2014 Share Posted October 8, 2014 So white.. my eyes hurt!! If your material on the house is a pure white with a 1.0 diffuse, change your diffuse to 0.75 or somewhere around there. Your building looks like it's just about to explode in brightness. I also second that there is too much clutter in the background, trees and plants take away from the actual building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Beaulieu Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 All I can say is that every is image is a good image if it is what you were hoping to achieve. I do have one question though: What were you hoping the viewer would learn from this image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 (edited) I think that the reason not many people are commenting is because the building doesn't make sense architecturally so you don't know where to start. For example: The path which would normally lead to an entry or a point of interest leads to a blank wall away from the entry. The entry on the corner has no landing. The windows on the green stone are strangely different sill heights. The large green walls on the right side are sitting on a piece of molding. There's a green wall motif but then on the left side there is a green stripe miami beach motif that comes out of nowhere. etc. Edited October 9, 2014 by heni30 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sai4u9 Posted October 10, 2014 Author Share Posted October 10, 2014 (edited) Thank you all...I rendered another side of the same house. Please share your opinion about this also... Edited October 10, 2014 by sai4u9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nileshbhagwat Posted October 30, 2014 Share Posted October 30, 2014 put some 3d tree and plants it will give you more realistic effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sai4u9 Posted November 1, 2014 Author Share Posted November 1, 2014 ok nilesh....thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zdravko Barisic Posted November 1, 2014 Share Posted November 1, 2014 Camera angle is to flat, almost like orthografic view. Make some more perspective view, change the camera angle. And place Sun behind the camera, or behind-right from camera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sai4u9 Posted November 2, 2014 Author Share Posted November 2, 2014 ok zdravko...thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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