Alicja Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 Hi all. First, it's my wip -small shop. Second, C&C are welcome, as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 good!, and so fashion.. i really like the composition, if the floor is a mirror is ok, but if it's not needs some distortion on it or reduce the amount of refleciton... BYE......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mallku Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 yep the colors are sober.... it looks good... but i think Juan Altieri is right... maybe the floor needs some distortion in the reflection. and there are a stains in the right white column... nice furnitures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 *welcome back!.. *just wondering, where's the entrance of the shop?..little adjustment on the grey wall.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Nelson Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 I don't know about anybody else, but for me its hard to understand what is going on in the scene. I really like the colors, crispness & clarity, but it seems to lack a sense of depth. I'm sure if I looked at a floorplan I would immediately go "oh!, thats what it is", but by looking at the image alone I have a hard time seeing it. Maybe that would be helped by having more contrast in shadows or more definition from the lighting, or maybe even a different perspective that gives us a better reference point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pmanahan Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 Very nice colors and design. The white floor looks too bright to me. The layout draws my eye to the center of the image where the dark blue is except I don't know what is going on there. I think it would look better to rotate the camera more towards the store opening, cropping off the woman on the right and bringing the the poster of the woman inside the store more to the center of the image. pmanahan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Cassil Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 I don't know about anybody else, but for me its hard to understand what is going on in the scene. I really like the colors, crispness & clarity, but it seems to lack a sense of depth. I'm sure if I looked at a floorplan I would immediately go "oh!, thats what it is", but by looking at the image alone I have a hard time seeing it. Maybe that would be helped by having more contrast in shadows or more definition from the lighting, or maybe even a different perspective that gives us a better reference point. I feel the same way but I think I know why... it's the floor. It's so reflective I get a little dizzy looking at it. I can't imagine the floor being a mirror like someone suggested, especially if they sell short skirts . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kulbir bal Posted November 4, 2004 Share Posted November 4, 2004 i too agree with timm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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