Krisztian Gulyas Posted October 26, 2014 Share Posted October 26, 2014 Studio/Institution: FreelancerGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: 3ds max 2014, vray 2.4Description: Something's not right with the image, maybe the lighting, colors, something else. It just doesn't feel right. What do you think, how could I improve the overall look of the image? Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philippelamoureux Posted October 26, 2014 Share Posted October 26, 2014 Maybe the white facade is too perfect white? Add imperfections to it for fun... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blank... Posted October 26, 2014 Share Posted October 26, 2014 Something's not right with the image, maybe the lighting, colors, something else. It just doesn't feel right. What do you think, how could I improve the overall look of the image? I would say colors and exposure. Everything is oversaturated and overexposed. Lighting is another thing, there are no shadows anywhere, everything is so bright but where is the light coming from? Those people are another thing, they don't work. At all. They also don't cast any shadows braking the illusion. Remove them. Sky - its to dark and blue for such a sunny day. My two cents. Here is what i came up with http://i.imgur.com/H5X0DTX.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harryhirsch Posted October 26, 2014 Share Posted October 26, 2014 Dario is right...the people jump into your eyes...and the sky is bit too dark for that lighting situation. I would work with the landscape..some shrubs, white gravel perhaps...and the right side of the ground floor could use some interior..paintings on the wall....the groundfloor glass is bit too bright/white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nileshbhagwat Posted October 27, 2014 Share Posted October 27, 2014 i think people proportion is also check it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fooch Posted October 27, 2014 Share Posted October 27, 2014 scale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zdravko Barisic Posted October 27, 2014 Share Posted October 27, 2014 Skybackground, and the scene lighting, are not matched at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted October 27, 2014 Share Posted October 27, 2014 (edited) One thing that looks strange is the foggy glass. It seems like the side glass reflections are crisp and clean whereas the front looks very muddled. It looks like there's smoke inside the building. Edited October 27, 2014 by heni30 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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