Need some critique guys

[mario22582]

Studio/Institution: Freelancer
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3ds Max, Vray, Photoshop
Description:

I need some critique guys. How is the lighting? Too overexposed?

 

 

[marius e]

Nice, my comment would be:

- Sky is to blue, tone down the blue

- Grass to lumo green, tone down to a bit more blue.

- Darken the foreground tree

 

Will bring out the realism.

[Zdravko Barisic]

Pull camera down, to get more exciting perspective view, more like frog view.

Not too much, only to get away from this kind of view.

[ionutteudean]

Roof Tiles look to flat.

Window reflections are too dark. A little peek inside would look better.

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Everything is to saturated and to clean, sky to dark, lacks variations in color.

Fix saturation, colors, add general subtle dirt to the building and roof and path, grass needs to be fixed, variations in color on vegetation, and other posprocessing tricks (vigneting, grain, camera distoriotn...)

My quick photoshop

[nileshbhagwat]

i think view are ok looking good and nice

[Corey Beaulieu]

I think that the saturation is definitely an issue and I think you really need to warm up the image. The illumination balance is also off.

 

Also, just build the tiles on the roof. You will be much happier with the results.

 

 

This was my quick adjustments using the Camera Raw Filter in Photoshop CC

Edited November 6, 2014 by CoreyMBeaulieu

[Stephen Thomas]

I think the camera position is kind of indecisive. It's almost straight-on, but not quite. I would either go fully straight on or swing round for a more interesting perspective.

[jonathanwiederin]

I think the roof is looking a little bit to flat. there would be more shadows. you could do this with a displacement or bump map.

but it`s looking good though...

[nileshbhagwat]

nice work and you have setup nice envorment