Style and mood.

[aristocratic3d]

HI,

I am posting these image here for your feedback and criticism. I showed these images to one of my clients who himself is a senior 3D artist and have a viz studio. He gave feedback that helped me a lot as he gave a lot of technical information on how to improve this image to the next level. I applied his suggestions except the trees. he wanted these to be regular trees. I will try that one as well though when I am free.

Anyway, these images are for voting. Just help me and let me know which one do you like the most and why?

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Thanks for your kind help.

Abdullah

[Chris MacDonald]

The first and last are the only ones that work. The middle two have skies that do not match the scene in terms of lighting, and is exacerbated by the luminous trees.

[philippelamoureux]

I agree with Chris, and for me the best is the 1st!

[Bundie]

The last one works best for me.

Maybe define the roof edge alittle on the right.

[aristocratic3d]

Well I like the first one as well. I was trying to see what I can do with this simple architecture. (landscape was provided by the client).

And client was happy with this- [/img]

 

I sent this raw rendering for client review and he says "approved".

 

I wish our client have more of an artistic eyes to appreciate a better quality work.

 

Anyway thanks for your help guys. I am gonna put this first image into portfolio until I have some time to experiment it with green trees.

 

cheers

Abdullah

Edited December 10, 2014 by aristocratic3d

[Piash]

First image will be the best among all the images. Though I'll change the sky if I were you. I think too much saturation or less saturation will not gonna save you. Building of the background as well as few cutout people sucks !!!