mareogomez Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 Studio/Institution: Personal workGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3ds max design 2015 , V-ray , PhotoshopDescription: hi, this is my first post on CGarchitect. I want to get better on archviz so ill be glad to hear your critics. thnx . MG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Francisco Penaloza Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 Over all it looks good, but the main thing that call my attention is that the house seems to not fit in place, regarding your background. The color temperature seems different or the brightness seems so constant that it just pop between the trees. Also some color variation on your environment would blend everything together better. Yes trees and grass are mostly green but they are not 100% green. Review some landscaping photography and houses in similar situation, this will give you eye to make your image better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryannelson Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 What Francisco said is spot on for sure. I think this image would lend itself well to a more intimate vibe than centreing the chalet smack dab in the middle of the image. Spent some time looking at some appropriate photography to get a better sense on cropping. A little DOF would go a long way with this i think to give the image more... well, depth. Have you tried adding a bit of fog to help set the mood? If this were a beach cottage, having bright sun is great, but this needs a different feel in my opinion. The flowers look a little off too I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mareogomez Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 Thnx for the tip Francisco, ill check around for some landscaping photographys . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mareogomez Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 hi Ryan....your right ! a little bit of DOF would give a nice mood on the scene. Thnx a lot . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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