satwinderdhariwal Posted March 4, 2015 Share Posted March 4, 2015 Studio/Institution: personal projectGenre: OtherSoftware: 3ds maxDescription: Hi, My names Satwinder this is my first post on here. Love to hear some crits and feedback. Thanks Saty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karloalvarez Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 Hi Satwinder I think the render is great have a correct ilumination that make bathtub the principal element in the render,personally the color of the floor tiles should be satturated and take a cleaner material,but i think the principal confusion in the composition should be the perspective,personally i think the render should be great if the axes in compositions make comes orthogonal and the roof should be more effective if the camera go up to the perspective,the render needs more roof. I dared to use your photo to make clear my point. Congrats for share your work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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