bryantromp Posted July 21, 2015 Share Posted July 21, 2015 (edited) Studio/Institution: StudentGenre: OtherSoftware: 3dsmax, corona, growfxDescription: A personal project i'm working on..a simple design house living off grid surrounded by pine forest. Some feedback r welcome Edited July 21, 2015 by bryantromp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
takare Posted July 23, 2015 Share Posted July 23, 2015 Bryan, It's a good start. I like the exterior shots a lot. Although I'm not sure the inside of the house would be so bright as seen from the outside. The images themselves look to be a bit grainy and take away from the realism. As for a series of images I would expect to see a forest in the interior images when looking out. Is the entire scene in 3D? If so you should be able to render from the inside and see the same forest. The skylight in the interior is showing some stepping. It's difficult to see what's going on with the materials since it is grainy. Would like to see how you are progressing on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryantromp Posted July 23, 2015 Author Share Posted July 23, 2015 Hey stephen thnks for the feedback.. yes the image is a little grainy cause its not the final render. The scene is full 3d but I switch off the layers when I did some interactive renderings for the interior otherwise max will just stagnate. For the interior brightness yeah I think is kinda too much but I'll dim it a little bit. Here's an old interior wip with the exterior scenery.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriscabrera Posted July 28, 2015 Share Posted July 28, 2015 its coming along nicely. i would try and get some more interesting angles inside the house, and as far as the fooliage goes, some variation in the green would make a nice feel for the exterior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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