broozee Posted July 21, 2015 Share Posted July 21, 2015 Hello experts, I was just curious if I could get some tips on how to improve this rendering? Any constructive criticism would be appreciated. Thanks in advance, Billy Raygun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
takare Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 Billy, the materials look good. You may want to explore a camera angle that pulls in closer and more direct. If the intention is to show this space in use you could build out a generic space on either side as it if was in its location (such as a mall). Those areas could just be plain white as to not distract but to frame or ground your model and give it scale. Adding product on the shelves with people would polish it out. One last item, you could add a reflection plane so the glass could pick up more details. Best of luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broozee Posted July 22, 2015 Author Share Posted July 22, 2015 Thank you Stephen - I appreciate the advise. I'll have a go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 Look at pictures of stores. The lighting in the shelving can be a lot more dynamic. Also a context would add a lot; nice ceiling, nice floor. The glass needs a lot more reflections - even if they're fake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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