Visual Pieces Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 Studio/Institution: VisualPiecesGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max, Vray, PhotoshopWebsite: http://www.visualpieces.com/Description: Hi! I need some suggestion and critique about this residential interior. I would greatly appreciate any constructive comments! thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoodleLuff Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 Hey... First thing I would say is that the outside seems very blue. Would be nice to see the colour of the mountains coming through the blueness a bit. Also, I think you can push the contrast in the image a lot more... see attached. But otherwise, looking nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Visual Pieces Posted July 24, 2015 Author Share Posted July 24, 2015 Thanks Alain, The client wanted a more washed image. I agree with your comments. In this update, for my preference, I added more contrast, change the outside and add a warm filter. Now, I dont know what else can change... jejeje Any other suggestions are welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 (edited) Looks better. I would fix that corner where everything is getting washed out. I would fake it and make sure the wood is separated from the white - especially because that's happening right in the middle of the rendering. I would keep everything but bring the original rug back - this one got too dark especially under the coffee table. I keep wondering where the lights are. Would there be some recessed cans somewhere? I would put some chaise lounges in the middle of the terrace that would create a nice visual path out into the water; and it would tell more of a story of how, when the sun goes down you can chill out there with a glass of wine watching the sailboats go by. Edited July 24, 2015 by heni30 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Visual Pieces Posted July 24, 2015 Author Share Posted July 24, 2015 thanks George, "I would fix that corner where everything is getting washed out. I would fake it and make sure the wood is separated from the white - especially because that's happening right in the middle of the rendering." yes, its burned in the original outpout. I need to make the wood darker.... yes, the rug is very dark. Need to put a more bright material. there are no artificial lights, except the lamps. I put some but the client, took them off. I will make another version of this scene for my portfolio. Any other suggestions are welcome! thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Visual Pieces Posted July 28, 2015 Author Share Posted July 28, 2015 Updated. Any other suggestions are welcome! thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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