Commercial Building

[Painful_Gulch]

Studio/Institution: Personnal
Genre: Commercial Exterior
Software: 3ds Max - vray - Photoshop
Description:

Hello everyone,

 

I would like your input about my image. I'm not 100% satisfied with the results, it seems to me it's missing something but i can't put my finger on it.

 

I'm thankfull in advance for all your comments and suggestions!

 

Ben

[jacobwallace]

Looks like a great start. I would Chamfer all edges, as for the materials they are the weakest link. Try to use bump and Specular maps on all building materials.

[Francisco Penaloza]

First try to render the RPC people In a separated pass or create a mask for them so you can correct the wrong gamma.

The same could be done with the cars.

Also try to get some 3D plants instead, or work a little more in your cut out technique, all your grass is coming With an dark halo.

IF you can't re render the image, you can use photoshot to straight the verticals in your building. Nest time activate the camera correction option inside max.

Ditch the blurry trees in the foreground, or at leas put only one and work a little in the amount of blurriness now it is more distracting that helping the image.

[hoseinasadi]

As francis have mentioned, your vegetation look a bit weird. Use 3d models if you can. Itoo Forest Pack has some decent looking free samples you could use for the lawn and bushes.