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Exterior House WIP


dancaldwell
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Studio/Institution: Personal Work
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Modo
Description:

Hi there,

 

Here's a quick render of an exterior I'm working on, would love some feedback on the shot and landscaping.

I'm still trying to find a suitable HDRI to take care of environment lighting and backing plate too so any recommendations there are also welcome :)

 

Thanks!

Dan

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  • 2 weeks later...

Hi

 

Perhaps i would start with improving the architectural design of the house.. making the elevation lines look cleaner and adding more depth in the glazed areas, door etc. Foreground white seems to be burning too much.. can be corrected in the material properties and also by adding some more shadows casted by trees in front or behind the camera.

 

Try and add some modeling detail to the upper walls shown in wood.

 

You can find some great free hdr on http://noemotionhdrs.net/

 

All the best

 

Aman

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