Getaway Weekend

[Guest namnguyen3]

Studio/Institution: Viz5
Client: Personal
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: SketchUp and Photoshop
Description:

Hello CG Architect

 

I'm new in forum and I just finished my piece today.

 

Could you please give me your honest feedback? What is good and bad? And how could I improve myself?

 

Thanks in advance and anything is appreciated

 

All the best

 

Nam Nguyen

 

Info about the project:

 

Project: Personal

Type: Residental Exterior

Inspiration: My dream vacation house near my hometown Esbjerg

Purpose: To get out of the buzzing city to relax and surf

Content: max 4 person. 2 bedroom, 1 kitchen/living room, 1 terrace.

Location: Wadden sea national park, west jutland, Denmark

Design notes: Woodhouse, danish weather and landscape, blend in nature, simple, chill, modern.

[SkylineArch]

I like the image overall, but I think it needs something to keep the viewers interest. More details fine in the construction of the building, materials that do not tile. Something to invite the eye and imagination into the house. Some warm exterior lighting, or finish and light the space inside. If this is the ocean side of the house, perhaps a boardwalk or path leading to the house.