3D Bedroom Render

[seanellis1]

Hi everyone,

 

Just wanted to share another 3D render . I hope you like it and as always feedback is welcome.

 

Thanks everyone

 

Sean

[Lewis Garrison]

Just my opinion but i'd turn down the blurry effect on the edges by a lot. If this were a photograph i'd want to clean of my camera lens and start over.

[seanellis1]

Thanks for the feedback Lewis ;-)

[Casey Hawley]

AO looks a bit over done, especially where the ceiling meets the walls, which highlights something strange going on at the upper left corner. Object scale seems inconsistent, for example the chair looks huge compared to the bed. For a room with such a big huge window on one side, the lighting is far from natural, meaning it doesn't seem to be coming from the window beyond the highlight on the floor.

[heni30]

It's true - it's like you have a nighttime scene right next to a sunlit scene. The bedspread folding under at the foot of the bed looks un-natural - the bottom edge doesn't look right and it's creating a strange dark void underneath. Side lights are a little bit too bright.

 

I think the artwork above the headboard is too busy and it creates this distracting nervous visual energy. I personally don't like the overall brown tone.

Edited November 1, 2018 by heni30