Ty Y Cornel Render

[seanellis1]

Hi again,

 

Hope I'm using the right forum topic for these posts, please let me know if there is a better thread for general feedback, but here's another 3D image of one of our latest projects. Please leave feedback if you have any as it is always appreciated.

 

Thank you :-)

 

Sean

iCreate

[Francisco Penaloza]

Usually, you should use the work in progress section for this type of post.

Your image looks ok, but it could be improved for sure.

IMO the time of the day is not the best selection, That hight Sun is creating too much contrast between bright and dark areas. You should always try to 'shape' your building with lights and shadows, or go a little more neutral with illumination (overcast, late on the day) so only softer shadows are present.

The roof material seems strange.

Even if all material are white, they are not the same, a White painted metal will look different to a white painted wood plank, try to work a little more on that, also remember to never use 100% white colors or textures, try to stay under 90%, the same goes to black, never 100% Black.

Also, a little variation of colors and random positions in the ground can help.

now everything is perfectly laid out, You could paint some accents in Photoshop using Dodge and Burn to create some irregular areas.

The same applies to the landscaping.