Townhouse Renders

[seanellis1]

Hi everyone,

 

Here's a 3D render of a recently completed project I wanted to share with you for feedback. What do you think?

 

Here's a link to the video too:

 

 

Thanks

 

Sean

iCreate

Edited April 18, 2019 by seanellis1

[akshayarora]

Honestly speaking - I just checked your portfolio, got to see some better images done by you than this one.

I am very impressed with your camera flow - you have placed a single camera in such a beautiful way. No jerks , very few places where I see improvements.

I wish If I do get some tips on camera movements from you

Animation looks better than the still image - There are some basic errors in image like GI is not looking nicely computed.

Some white spotches are there near chandelier.

Fabrics/textures needs improvements.

 

By the way I am curious to know have you rendered that camera animation in single file ?

[Casey Hawley]

Models, lighting, and textures are great. Only critique I have is that the music doesn't fit the camera movement style. Audio is most effective when used to enhance the visual and it's not doing that here.

 

Other than that, nice work!

[lizbackus]

This looks like a really good start to a 3D walk through!

[Lewis Garrison]

Looks great! I would only have the camera cut or transition between shots. I was never a fan of the continuous roller-coaster ride through a building as it's not how you'd film a real life space, however that's just my personal preference.