First Rendering Ever

[adamfalsetto]

Studio/Institution: cg school
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Revit, 3DS Max, Vray, Photoshop
Description:

Revit Technologist by trade. Always interested in arch viz, decided to buy the cg school series (thanks Jeff Mottle) learning 3ds max, vray , and photoshop all at the same time. This is my first ever WIP so any comments criticisms would be awesome

[Andy Prasetyo]

Wow, It's a good start. 

I think you must take attention to detail, example : 
- there is not contact shadow in every cut out people or trees you have added
- try to use small focal length for exterior, I usually using 25mm
- make the car motion blur it would be nice 
- missing grass
- missing shadow
- try to match color balance, saturation & brighness of cut outs into the render

- inside building is empty room, you can put any room in Photoshop
- the car is sink with streets

- you can fill the foreground with flowers

 

This is what I can help, sorry for my bad english. I still learning too. 

Below I attached a marked images. 

On 11/4/2019 at 10:10 AM, adamfalsetto said:

Revit Technologist by trade. Always interested in arch viz, decided to buy the cg school series (thanks Jeff Mottle) learning 3ds max, vray , and photoshop all at the same time. This is my first ever WIP so any comments criticisms would be awesome

 

[Lewis Garrison]

It looks like your are trying to achieve a distance fog affect for object farther away but its transitioning too quickly at an angle across the top left of the image. I would utilize the Zdepth pass in photoshop to make this more realistic.